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pandorica
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Last activity on 17/08/2017 at 01:46
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im ok i say
shes putting it on they say, there's nothing wrong with her they whisper!
if only they new my demons inside
if only they Knew how much i cried.
if only they knew how much i bleed to stop the pain
if only they knew the shame.
if only they knew how much i toss and turn at night
if only they knew how hard i fight
with all the thoughts and emotions
will i ever see the light???
IF ONLY

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Last activity on 12/10/2016 at 23:24
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I can't see, where is the light? I know it`s here somewhere!
I must tidy up this mess before anyone guesses
Why are there so many doors? they go on forever!
I know what to do! I`ll ask someone to help me!
Maybe this time i can explain?
sorry i don't mean to be like this.
I dont want you to fix me, honestly i just want to hold your hand while i fix myself.
sorry i didn't mean to be so miserable.
why dont the words come out properly?
sorry we didnt work out, i`m not really crazy, its not fair you call me that.
Please dont do that.
please dont say that.
I am trying.
I feel sick.
what if i wasn't here?
sorry we can only sell you this many tablets
sorry we can only sell you this many tablets
hello can i have an ambulance
i know i`ll go out on the bike !
why am i so useless?
what would you want to do that for?
i hardly deserve that!
I miss you dad.
dad! dad! dont do this dad please!
its ok dad i love you, its over now it cant hurt you any more i`ll look after mom.
I know mom i miss him too.
oh your feeling better? wish i could.
what!!!! but you cant be pregnant !! its eptopic !! termination???
I know you are hurting sweetheart.
me too.
what mom, how can he have cancer aswell?
he`s ok ?
it wont come back will it?
i wonder why i havent caught cancer yet.
whats his name? do you love him? but what about the kids?
refuge? why? i didnt lay a finger on her!!!
where are they?
i miss my babies!!!
no sir i do have their best interests at heart.
i`m so sorry girls i dont think we will ever find out why she did it!
"DAD"
"YES BABY"
"WHAT YOU DOING, I`M HUNGRY"
"SORRY BABY, JUST THINKING ABOUT STUFF"
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leave me alone i`m scared of being lonely
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Gilda
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Last activity on 03/02/2023 at 15:26
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Hello everyone!
Taking into consideration Neil's advice we want to start a new conversation in which you can express yourself through writing. If you want it to be a short story, poem, tale, song, even a whole novel.... Anything that helps you channel all you need to say and that in normal words you can't.
So I leave you this space and feel free to use it as you wish and ask our writing expert @Bipolarbill for advice.
All the best,
Gilda