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Sounds good, although not the most salacious chap
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Perfectly dead
Pretty little doll all penciled in,thieves stole her smile
Mother's talk on corners, children pleading at the knee
There's something wrong with her they say
Then move on with their day with not a sound
Standing on the edge ready to fall
Screaming in the darkness,no help ever came
He opened her like a book ,taking his fill
Devouring all that was beautiful inside her
For year's she cried for the daemon to die
Yet the wolf came back hungrier then before
The book closes but the nightmare's remain
She's just an empty vase painted for no reason of her own
The flower once pure now dead and blackened on the floor
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Wow @katrinaj87 this is so intense! I like it a lot and it makes me sad at the same time. It is really well written and you can totaly feel all the pain and connect, you tell a whole story just in few lines.
Thanks a lot for sharing this with the rest. If you want to share more please keep doing it!
All the best,
Gilda
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Rag Doll
Sad little princess all torn and broken
All she wanted was to see the stars
Help is what she needed,a prison's what she found
Slave to the pound, children in chain's
The poster's on the wall.....starving little runaway
Demons in pursuit,clawing at the dark
Year's have passed not much has changed
New life,new demon’s it's all the same
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Curtain Call
Standing there alone waiting for the show to begin,her palms sweaty her heart pounding. Acting has become just another daily chore,mundane and repetitive. Her jaw aches with the stain of a thousand empty lies, her smile just another painting on her useless lips. The curtains open,the crowd stares ,again, waiting for another dumb act so they have an excuse to laugh. She wishes for the night, when she is alone smile gone,music up,tears running unchecked down her cheek. She sips away at another ounce of poison ,Novocaine for the soul. she laughs,she dances,she smiles. There's so much noise, so loud saying everything,but nothing all just adding to numb the deadening power of the human condition.
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Oh dear oh dear
Life is full of woe ! There's so much wrong
with the world and so
I myself , don't have to be
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My heart stops every time I think of all the time we've spent together, always telling me what to do and ruining every opportunity of happiness. You are the master of my emotions and my happiness, you the one that tells me I'm fat every time I see myself on the mirror, you who thinks that I am never enough... You are killing me softly, but I won’t let you.
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Is this Zen ?
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Another awful day
I awake
To this
Misery
Again
Again and again
Misery again and again
Never ending pain
Never ever and ever ending pain
The never ever ending pain
Of this terrible , endless never ending pain
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I do not dwell on the pain of my past ,
I want to live for today,
I fill my mind with joy and hope that will last ,
there's no room for bad thoughts , no way !!
I only focus on things that lift me higher ,
a family picture around a camp fire .
There is happiness to be had if you look in the right places ,
turn your nightmares into pretty dreams and flower beds in your minds darkest spaces.
Never let yourself be beaten , fight like a warrior would ,
Be brave , be bold , get up on your feet , and you can turn all that is Bad into Good .
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Hello everyone!
Taking into consideration @Bipolarbill for advice.
All the best,
Gilda