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xDarenx
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Last activity on 06/03/2016 at 11:24
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I'll go
Over the rainbow
Flying
Without trying
Strumming
And humming
With joy
The hoi
Polloi,cats and teddies share there
Living on steak and milk and honey
All in love is fair there
No one needs money .
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I feel so alone, there is so much going on in my head, this emotional pain is slowly destroying me........no one can hear my silent screams!!!!
I just want to be invisible, to fade away, to just disappear..........or do I?
I cant keep this mask on for much longer but I don't dare to show anyone the real me..........or can I?
I cant trust anyone......or can I?
All I know is that is sure is messy in my head right now.
I want to cry but that would mean I am weak and pathetic....or would it?
Everything hurts so much
xDarenx
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The Sun is Out,
The Sky is Blue,
There's such a lot of things to do ,
When it's not Raining .... It better not bleedin' start !!!
Daren x
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Paper poison (Moneys hold on our world)
When monsters are god's holding us in the sweet embrace
We choose to see the devil or the mask ,this cage of steel
Knots in the thread slipping through,transparent to few the light to many
Blackened Cities, children dead like beautiful roses strewn across the floor
The fountain of youth toxic with the debt of countries and lives
Chasing the world on crutches of the poor, the storm approaches...
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Falling like so meny before
The bottom is so close
There's no ladder ,no rope
This hurts deeper then my eyes can see
Time is no savior, just game's to play
You say you love me as i watch you fall
Help me , help you
I'll bring you the sky
I'll bring you heaven
Just give me your hand
Help me understand ...
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Everest
Tattered ribbons of rotted silk
Adorn
the strewn corpses
of lunatics
who
Come here
To die .
Why ?
' Because it's there '
Fools selling
The Double glazed mask
An empty summit
Fools climbing mountains
So that
They
Feel alive .
ian59
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Gilda
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Gilda
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Last activity on 03/02/2023 at 15:26
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Hello guys,
You can't begin to imagine how happy it makes me to see that you are using this discussion and I hope it is helping.
Keep the good work, I love all you've written.
All the best,
Gilda
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xDarenx
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xDarenx
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Said Aristotle unto Plato ,
" Want to come with me to AA Bro ? "
Said Plato unto Aristotle ,
" Thank you , I prefer the Bottle "
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I spend each day inside a cage,
A cage that others do not see;
The bars are pain and suffering,
Will I ever be set free?
Each day I stare out through these bars,
And wonder where I’ll find the key;
I face the world and always smile,
The only one who knows is me.
If someone opened wide my cage,
This cage of pain I’ve lived so long;
I wonder, would I be relieved?
Would leaving it feel too wrong?
Each fresh pill brings hope anew,
Hope that this might be the one;
I gulp it down and wait to see,
Has this pill, the battle won?
Nothing’s changed, the pain’s still there,
The cage bars are still thick and strong;
Familiar pain, the friend of years,
Pain that’s been there oh so long.
I dream one day I’ll be pain free,
The cage, the bars will disappear;
I’ll live my life as others do,
No longer start each day in fear.
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Hello everyone!
Taking into consideration @Bipolarbill for advice.
All the best,
Gilda